FLASH: pretty please, critique

[Sarah Lamont]

{I'm really sorry if I'm posting this twice, but I sent this the first

time and I don't think I sent it to the right place or something because

it hasn't appeared on the list yet. Very very sorry if the reason I'm not

seeing it on the list is because of a lag time, and then everyone gets

it twice.:}

Hey Everyone---

Could you please spare a minute or two and look at the animation I did? I did post it to the list a couple weeks ago, but have revised it since then. I really need input on the perspective in the drive through, please...:]
And also, I know the talking bubbles look cheesy, they are serving as placeholders for real voices. I am waiting for our microphone to be fixed so I can put them together, along with a voice-over for the drive through. Once that gets in , the whole thing will make more sense. But the main thing I need help with now is just the visuals, so if anyone has any feedback, please help me! :]
It takes about a minute or 2 to load, just so you know.
Thanks ever so much!
The URL is www.2mtc.com/animation/
:]
Sarah