Re: [flasher] sitecheck: WhoIsFlora.net

[derrickito]

i noticed quickly that it was hard to read alot of the text, especially the

text in the intro.

really faded into the background color.



> > Hey there  --

> >

> > I'd like someone to have a look at my site http://www.whoisflora.net

> > and shoot me some feedback.

> >

> > It's an interactive narrative I've been working on for some time. I

> > look forward to hearing what people think (especially from the

> > outside...).

>

> heya man

>

> i really liked your site .... there was something very haunting about it,

> reading a dead womans very personal thoughts...  i liked the music to..

and

> would have liked it to play for that little bit longer ( maybe loop twice

or

> something ) .. as it took a a while to explore the pages and the music

added

> so much...

>

> i only found 5 areas too? are their more? is their going to be more ? :)

>

> anywayz .. i liked very muchly

>

> 8_b!t_b@y

>